Chapter 001: - October 12th, 2010, 1:41 am
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Color! [Posted by Izumi Hikaru on October 22nd, 2010, 2:46 am]

I know first pages of manga's first chapters are in color,

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User Comments

[Posted by SaMBa on October 28th, 2010, 12:52 pm]

oh hi thnakx 4 z comment ^^

[Posted by gaiadarkstar on April 12th, 2011, 12:30 pm]

You asked for critique, I hope that is what you meant. I like the girl a lot though I think coloring her hair a little more so it stands out more would help. She is so soft and pale that she fades into the background. I would also say "That Handsome guy..." Just to make it clearer. The guys face is a little flat I think if his nose came out more it would look better.

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